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Writing and Editing

WEEK 4

11.07.2022 - 15.07.2022

Writing

and Editing

11.07.2022

Today, I downloaded some voice clips from my dad in which he answered the following questions:

- What comes to mind when you hear the word Cornwall?

- What does Cornwall mean to you?

- Imagine you are at the beach right now, what are you seeing/feeling/hearing/smelling?

- What makes Cornwall different to other places you have been?

- What is your history with Cornwall?

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With his answers, I intend to show the community and fellowship that rural areas provide through the lens of my dad and his childhood in Cornwall. I wish to contrast this to the loneliness and isolation that exists in city and urban areas. 

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I also began on my overall script/score that includes the order of my piece so far. This helps me to keep track of my texts and gage the flow of my performance on paper. For projections, I downloaded the latest QLab and created a picture montage showing the sights of Cornwall. This will assist my narrator role weather check ins. 

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12.07.2022

 

Today I got to see a potential scaffolding structure to use as a part of my set. I also recorded the sounds of it being set up as it gave off strong industrial, metal noises. It could also be a means of a structure that could hold projections on. 

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I completed check in no.2 of my narrative text.

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13.07.2022

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Today, I had my second tutorial with Patrick. We looked at the threads I have in my piece so far:

- The city

     - Construction workers/bees (high vis)

     - Men and masculinity

     - Isolation and windthrow

- Polperro

    - Dad

    - Community & the coast

    - Family tree

- The coast

    - Cornish boat festival

    - Mythology (siren, doom bar)

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